My winner, chosen by Random,org is Suzy R. Thank you soooo much everyone for your comments. The poem lines were really imaginative! I had a great time with this contest and hope you did too. October is my favorite month mostly because of Halloween but also because I love the change of seasons. We still have hot weather here in Florida, but the daylight hours are getting shorter and I see a few leaves turning color. It gets me in the mood for spooky stuff, how about you? I tried out Rafflecopter last month and liked it so much I'm going to do another. This one lasts all month and I'm adding a fun component. I wrote a short, creepy poem and am asking you to come up with the last line. I'm not a great poet so my rhythm and rhyme is off but that's okay, it was fun to write. If you want to play along, give me one or even two lines at the end that rhyme with 'beat'. Your line/s doesn't have to be perfect, just have a good time with it. If you don't want to come up with one that's okay,leave a comment and say hello. I'd love to hear from you either way. The dragon bling is super cool! The winner will get to choose which piece they want (US and Canada only, please) or you can have your choice of a back list Ebook (International). Good luck and thanks for playing! What would you do if a ghost haunted you And wouldn't stay dead where you put him. He belongs in the ground with the rest of the worms Not here every night in your bedroom Invading your dreams With blood-curdling screams Shrieking promises of sweet revenge. You had no choice but to end his life With a bullet straight to the heart. Now he won't go away He's darkening your days And tearing your mind apart. A ritual, you've heard, will end him for good No matter how strong his will. The witch lady said "It's simple to do, Just magic, full moon and a spell. A few drops of blood, you drink down the potion We'll call up the spirits tonight. Back to the grave we'll send him away Before the dawn breaks with first light." But something goes wrong, the tonic's too strong, Your heart pounds its last living beat. You join your ex-lover in his ghostly world
44 Comments
Chante Judy
10/3/2013 10:17:09 am
Hello! I discovered you at Halloweenapalooza. I love to read awesome stories and meet new authors. Your tales are now in my sights : )
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Naomi Bellina
10/3/2013 11:27:17 am
Thank you so much, J. Awesome last line! It carries lots of despair.
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Chante Judy
10/6/2013 02:57:27 pm
thanks :-)
Chante Judy
10/3/2013 10:27:49 am
Your soul withers in utter defeat....
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Naomi Bellina
10/6/2013 08:49:55 am
Why thank you so much, Sandie! I'm not much into poetry either but sometimes they're fun to write.
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HOTCHA
10/6/2013 08:04:33 am
AND YOU BOTH IN UP IN DEFEAT.
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Naomi Bellina
10/6/2013 08:51:48 am
Very dark and dismal. Perfect!
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Suzy
10/6/2013 08:25:00 am
Where you'll shiver and tingle forever...
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Naomi Bellina
10/6/2013 08:53:26 am
Great descriptive words. I actually shivered!
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Naomi Bellina
10/6/2013 12:52:35 pm
Whoa, that's spooky! Nice!
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Chante Judy
10/6/2013 03:00:59 pm
where all sins forever repeat
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Naomi Bellina
10/6/2013 04:37:56 pm
Another great line! You should write a Halloween poem, C.
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Stacey A Smith
10/6/2013 03:33:32 pm
Sweet Revenge he did get ,now we suffer in this Ghostly World Together !
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Stacey A Smith
10/6/2013 03:35:24 pm
ok don't no if that goes.not a poet and I no it.
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Naomi Bellina
10/6/2013 04:38:55 pm
It's a great line. I love revenge themes!
Chante Judy
10/17/2013 03:10:01 am
Now both are mine cackles the witch, what a delicious treat
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Naomi Bellina
10/18/2013 03:55:41 pm
Perfect!
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laurie
10/21/2013 04:10:43 am
I'm so not a poet, but I do love this poem!
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Naomi Bellina
10/21/2013 04:39:06 am
Thank you so much! You never know, you might have a poet buried deep inside who will come out and surprise you one day.
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JeanMP
10/22/2013 05:12:01 am
My silly side came out when I thought this line
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Naomi Bellina
10/22/2013 12:49:15 pm
Bwa-ha-ha! I love this, SK. Too cute!
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Naomi Bellina
10/22/2013 12:50:19 pm
Ah, revenge. Excellent line!
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jennifer mathis
10/22/2013 07:55:27 pm
yeah after staring at it for a long time i came up with nothing :(
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Naomi Bellina
10/23/2013 01:52:17 am
That's okay J, you're entered anyway. Hey, you might wake up yelling out a line in the middle of the night. Wouldn't that be fun?
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Lisa B.
10/22/2013 11:07:35 pm
And now the two lovers are under six feet.
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Naomi Bellina
10/23/2013 01:53:29 am
That line fits so well. Good one!
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Lisa B.
10/22/2013 11:10:15 pm
Thank you for the fun contest.
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Laurie P
10/26/2013 06:45:44 am
For it was his own happily ever after he did seek.
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Naomi Bellina
10/26/2013 11:10:56 am
Now that put goose bumps down my spine. Nice!
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bn100
10/28/2013 01:03:31 pm
without a chance to retreat
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Naomi Bellina
10/28/2013 02:00:12 pm
Just perfect! Great line!
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bn100
10/28/2013 01:04:05 pm
Nice poem
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10/29/2013 12:27:13 pm
To find between you and him there's still heat. (couldn't help but turn it sexy. lol) I LOVE the Dragon bling. I was going to buy some as a treat to myself for Christmas. I'm keeping my fingers crossed.
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Naomi Bellina
10/29/2013 12:57:07 pm
What else would we expect from a romance writer? Great line!
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And you realize it was the witch who handed you your defeat,
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Naomi Bellina
10/30/2013 02:34:58 am
Wow! I love the extra lines. So spooky and yet romantic. That is awesome!
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desiree
10/31/2013 01:30:50 pm
the ghostly realm will take s to the end of the work and will watch
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Naomi Bellina
11/1/2013 03:33:24 am
Nice and creepy!
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